I personally think it could be more persuasive.
To start with think about the places you enjoy visiting in Bradford and why.
Secondly, check out:
Finally, choose two or three landmarks to write about.
Start with an introduction- Make sure it's really persuasive!
Write a subheading - The history of Bradford and tell your reader a little about that.
The next two subheadings and paragraphs are up to you!
Make them really colourful and upload them on to the blog!