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Edit and improve your biography

 

Read through your work and check it makes sense and check for any spelling or punctuation errors.

Use the success criteria to check what you have included. If you have missed anything out, you may need to rewrite some parts of your biography. You could get someone else to check your work with you. 

Success Criteria

3rd person

past tense (the conclusion may use present or future tense)

key events written in chronological order

adverbial phrases

a range of conjunctions

 

Once you have finished editing and improving your work, write it up in neat using your best cursive writing.