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LO: To edit and improve


Today you are going to edit and improve your recount of the trip. 


First you need to complete the BBC Bitesize Daily Lesson on proof reading. 

Now you are going to edit and improve your recount. 

First read through your recount and check for any errors in spelling, punctuation and grammar. 

Next use the tick sheet to check you have used the correct features in your recount. 

If you have missed any features out, then now is the time to add them in. You can do this by rewriting sentences or paragraphs of your writing. 


Recount Checklist

Once you have finished your editing and improving, read through your writing one more time then put it somewhere safe because you will need it for tomorrows lesson. smiley