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LO: To write a recount


Today you are going to use your plan from yesterday to write your recount of one of the virtual trips. 


First complete the daily lesson on writing recounts which will help you with your writing. 

Use your plan to help you to write about what you did on your virtual trip. Use the following success criteria in your writing. 


Success Criteria

First person

Past tense 

Write in chronological order - What did you do first? What did you do after that? 

Expanded noun phrases

A range of conjunctions

Fronted adverbials with a comma

A range of adverbs: when, where, how

Commas in a list 

An exclamation mark


Read through your first draft and once you are happy with it, put it somewhere safe because you will need it or tomorrows lesson.